
MY LAST VACATION
I went on a trip with my family to a cabain in the beach. that was fun because i could spend time talking and enjoing. at night I went to a parties with my friends. there i danced a lot and enjoyed too. I spend there for two weeks then i went to bucaramanga for a week. In bucaramanga I visited a lot of parks and rivers and relax to much.
when i was in the beach i needed a bathing suit a towel an d a lot of shampooto clean my hear after be in the ocean. at night i used makeup to look good to go to the parties. In bucaramanga I needed a tent and a sleeping bag whwn I was in the rivers and parks i needed a insect repellent and a flashlight too.
Ithink you should go to bbucaramanga because is a good oportunity to be with the nature in the rivers and parks, see and enjoy our good and beatiful country COLOMBIA
Good for the interest in the activity.
ResponderEliminarMake the necessary corrections on puctuation and spelling.
ami... is great composition....i like..you just need to correct a couple words...
ResponderEliminarjeje good job!! I like your last vacations!! I think you just need to check some words and puctuation. you blog is organized!!
ResponderEliminarjejej cool!! you enjoyed a lot, usually at night, chek your composition...
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