martes, 21 de julio de 2009

last vacation
















MY LAST VACATION
I went on a trip with my family to a cabain in the beach. that was fun because i could spend time talking and enjoing. at night I went to a parties with my friends. there i danced a lot and enjoyed too. I spend there for two weeks then i went to bucaramanga for a week. In bucaramanga I visited a lot of parks and rivers and relax to much.

when i was in the beach i needed a bathing suit a towel an d a lot of shampooto clean my hear after be in the ocean. at night i used makeup to look good to go to the parties. In bucaramanga I needed a tent and a sleeping bag whwn I was in the rivers and parks i needed a insect repellent and a flashlight too.

Ithink you should go to bbucaramanga because is a good oportunity to be with the nature in the rivers and parks, see and enjoy our good and beatiful country COLOMBIA



4 comentarios:

  1. Good for the interest in the activity.
    Make the necessary corrections on puctuation and spelling.

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  2. ami... is great composition....i like..you just need to correct a couple words...

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  3. jeje good job!! I like your last vacations!! I think you just need to check some words and puctuation. you blog is organized!!

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  4. jejej cool!! you enjoyed a lot, usually at night, chek your composition...

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